Monday, September 28, 2009

Nociceptive disEntanglement

Entangled. Entwined. Like a pair of confused strings.
It aches. A constant confounding pain clouding the senses.

Pull away too quickly just to re-entangle the kinks.
And pull harder to snap free.
It will hurt. A sudden lethal heartbleed.

Be unmoving. Still as silence.
As I slowly disentangle myself from around you.
It's felt. Like a slow blade on my half benumbed skin.

3 comments:

  1. amazing!
    love is an illusion.whosoever u r,i think u r obsessed with her more than being in love wid her.coz love is a positive feeling.if its sucking ur senses out of u,then mr,u r mistaken..one big time.

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  2. Wow!!! I simply love this one.
    (Bows down)

    though I would second Magus.
    Love doesn't have to be like this. It is a beautiful warm feeling, not such huge a pain. Move out dude, u will sooner or later realize that it is an illusion.

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