Sunday, June 10, 2012

Coffee spots, ink blots
Colonise the petri dish
Of an idle mind

Posted by schish at 20:45
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10 comments:

  1. Aayushi MehtaJune 10, 2012 at 9:02 PM

    I am jealous of your ability to write haiku with perfect syllable counts.

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  2. schishJune 10, 2012 at 9:09 PM

    Just discovered that these are not technically haiku, with cutting, season-word, non-human and all. Also, it seems that the syllable rule is kinda obsolete now. :/ This might be something called senryu, maybe?

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  3. schishJune 10, 2012 at 9:11 PM

    Nevertheless, these just flowed as they are, as thoughts. Just wrote them down.

    Whatever they are, I'm just glad they're liked.

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    1. Aayushi MehtaJune 11, 2012 at 4:08 PM

      But how do your thoughts flow in perfectly counted syllables? I also want such skills!

      LOL@psychu tag. :D

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  4. Aayushi MehtaJune 10, 2012 at 9:15 PM

    It's probably neither. But more likely to be Senryu.

    I was thinking the same, about it technically not being haiku, but then there's no other term for this kind of poetry.

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  5. schishJune 10, 2012 at 9:19 PM

    Do you have a better name in mind?

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  6. Aayushi MehtaJune 10, 2012 at 9:25 PM

    No, why would I?

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  7. schishJune 10, 2012 at 9:31 PM

    'cause if it's probably neither, then it's nameless poetry now. :(

    psychu? *ok i just goes*

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